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    Sakura.<3

    Sakura
    Sakura


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    Join date : 2009-06-20
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    Post  Sakura Sat Jun 20, 2009 2:01 pm

    Character Profile Name: Sakura
    Age: 16.
    Gender: Female.
    Current Residence: Goes where her heart tells her and sleeps in trees.
    Weapons: A gun.
    Personality: Shy, smart, quiet, mysterious.
    Physical Appearance: Short brown hair with dark brown neko ears on her head and a fluffy tail behind her. She was 5'3 and had light brown eyes. In her hair wore a yellow bow to keep it back. On her body was a white shirt with yellow on the ends, short black shorts and white leggings the went up to her knees.
    History: Sakura had a hard life as she grew up. When she wasn't even one, her father left. Leaving her mother to look atfter her and her older brother alone. As Sakura grew up she knew that she would never see her real father and started seeing him as a traiter. Sakura felt bad that her mother had to provide for everyone on her own. Sakuras brother, Miko, was getting older and was going to leave soon to start his own family which scared her because she knew she didn't know how to help her mother out like Miko could.
    Two months after Sakura turned 7, her mom brought a new guy home and coul tell he was going to cause problems. The way he looked at her and touched her gave her shivers and she was sure he was a monster, but what could she do? Her mother wouldn't have believed her if she told so all she did was avoid him as best as she could but he always kept coming back. He bossed Sakura around telling her to dance for him, strip, clean his messes, etc..
    One night when everyone was asleep, Sakura heard noises; not knowing what they were, she just stayed in her bed and fell asleep again. When a couple minutes later, someone entered her room and Sakura sat up to see who it was because whoever it was he was crawling on her. Sakura kicked and screamed, doing everything she could to get him away that's when he leaned closer to her and told her to shut up; the person was her stepfather. Sakura was being raped by someone that should be looking out for her and she couldn't believe it.
    when he left, she started packing her bag and hid it in her families garden, running back into the house to grab her stepfathers gun. She loaded the gun with one buttet knowing it was all she was going to need. Before morning came, Sakura walked into her stepfathers room, aiming the gun at his heart. Her hands trembled and she knew she had to do it so she closed her eyes and pulled the trigger- BAM!
    Sakura ran for the door, positive that people would be waking up to the sound. She grabbed her bag from the garden and ran to the south not sure where she was going but not looking back. That day Sakura was starting her knew life, leaving all the things that happened behind her. Hoping that she could find her brother and live with him. Today, Sakura still wonders around in search for her brother, killing anyone in her way.
    Skills: Music, shooting a gun, cat-like reflexes.
    Powers: Killing with a smile.
    Prince Zythras
    Prince Zythras
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    Post  Prince Zythras Sun Jun 21, 2009 12:52 am

    Your Power cannot be killing with a smile. Even if it has some weird metaphorical meaning, it can be taken literally.

    Everything else is fine. Just fix up the powers and you'll be good to go.

    Also, please be aware this is not modern, it is more towards Medeival times, so when writing, try and keep in mind that people back then did not usually remarry or find a new partner, unless they were men.
    Ty Typhoon
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    Post  Ty Typhoon Sun Jun 21, 2009 7:27 pm

    It's very good. I agree with Zythras, change your powers.

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